Wednesday, May 5, 2010

the reality is . . .

Note to Self:

You often use figurative language when you write. Your posts are layered in a hodgepodge of metaphor. However, I hope you realize that a blog post is not a work of Fantasy.  So, when you begin a sentence with "the reality is"  (which you do quite often) it leaves the reader pondering whether there were dragons or elves or other fictitious woodland creatures inhabiting the prior paragraph.  Which would be cool, really, because most of the time you're just talking about teaching or telling stories about your family or getting on a soapbox about the world.  Your blog could use a few more clashes with giants.


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